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My love, Defined by ~poetOflore:iconpoetOflore:



Love
A love eternal
Love defined
For ever a dark valentine

A heart in pain
Will continue to bloom
In till Faint
The petals once evolved
Will fall releasing rage
Letting go of sorrow and hate

All that’s left in love and fear
IS a sense of losing
All that may be dear

Love tends so many things
It brings warmth through delicate kisses
Adventurous romance that knows no bounds
And tender patience within eternity’s stare

For a man this brings fear
Hiding, masking itself behind worries of a caressing kind
Thoughts are of insecurity are pondered following an insane rhyme
Will she leave me?
Why me?
Did I push too hard?
And is there time?

Then, and do not blame
Rationality sets in
When the emotion is pushed aside
All that’s left is the mind

The eyes of the lovers meet
Knowing within their kind orbs
To know how another feels has a much better concept then to speculate
This fact is true
I couldn’t be any more sure

I write this simply
For a girl
Who has stolen my heart
And beaten my tests

Amy is a woman pure of heart
To her I show what know
Speaking the strongest of words I can muster
Dearest love, you are my beauty, my safety my life
Never doubt my love; never let it out of your sight
It is in my nature
To push and pull
Annoy and bother
I do this to test, out of insecurity I gather
I worry this I must confess
I am not good enough
It least I realize that in you I have found the best
©2008 ~poetOflore
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~pirates-r-smexy:iconpirates-r-smexy: Apr 1, 2008, 8:54:50 AM
Aww, that's so sweet of you! ^_^

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Well you had me from hello
I felt love start to grow
The moment that I looked into your eyes
You won me
It was over from the start
You completely stole my heart
And now you won't let go
I never even had a chance you know
You had me from hello
~AmiShadows:iconAmiShadows: Apr 1, 2008, 11:26:40 AM
AWWWWWWW I LOVE YOU PANDA!!!!!! THANK YOUIS>_^ *Hugs kisses and rapes you and this poem. * :heart:

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~poetOflore:iconpoetOflore: Apr 2, 2008, 12:30:10 PM Mood: Joy
it is because i am big papa panda, and nothing i do is never without it

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~poetOflore:iconpoetOflore: Apr 2, 2008, 12:32:41 PM Mood: Lust
lol i love you to :hugs: i understand the concept of raping me but does one rape a poem, is it like a mind rape because i supose a poem is nothing more then the concept of an emotion or possibly myriad emotions; thusly, mind rape is possible

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~AmiShadows:iconAmiShadows: Apr 2, 2008, 12:37:02 PM
Indeed shallow and padantic? LOLZ Just kidding. I feel good in knowing that I can rape you Physicaly, mentaly, and spritaly... XDDDDDDD

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"Are you special? because your parents are retarded..."
~pirates-r-smexy:iconpirates-r-smexy: Apr 2, 2008, 10:18:52 PM
Lol yes you are. ^_^

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Well you had me from hello
I felt love start to grow
The moment that I looked into your eyes
You won me
It was over from the start
You completely stole my heart
And now you won't let go
I never even had a chance you know
You had me from hello
~poetOflore:iconpoetOflore: Apr 6, 2008, 8:33:20 PM Mood: Joy
lmao that is alot of rape

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~animegirlfroggy:iconanimegirlfroggy: Apr 11, 2008, 7:59:20 AM
You certainly have a way with words Luccie. I really like the way the poem flows from the first part to the second part. :heart:

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My Club -> ~luffy-club
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~poetOflore:iconpoetOflore: Apr 20, 2008, 6:21:54 AM Mood: Joy
aww THANKS YOU VAL!

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